Hawaiian Supermom

By

Maka

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8 Jul 2014

Party

too busy weeping little do the mourners know it’s reunion time!

too busy weeping

little do the mourners know

it’s reunion time!

Tags:

death, family, haiku, haiku horizons, poem, poetry, writing, writing prompt

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magicalmysticalteacher

12 Jul 2014

Sorrow can certainly bring down the tone of a party.

After the Party

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Sumana Roy

10 Jul 2014

Hard truth…nicely done

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SwetaSinha

10 Jul 2014

Nice haiku with tones of sadness . Loved it.

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1. Monica Lee
  
  10 Jul 2014
  
  Happy you enjoyed it!
  
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jazzytower

9 Jul 2014

A two for one then, it is odd but saying farewell often turns out to be a gathering fit for a reunion as well. I like this.

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1. Monica Lee
  
  10 Jul 2014
  
  Thank you! Never thought of it as being a two-fer, but now that you mention it… 😉
  
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milan rajkumar

8 Jul 2014

nice take ! i like this one !

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1. Monica Lee
  
  10 Jul 2014
  
  Thank you, Milan!
  
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  1. milan rajkumar
    
    10 Jul 2014
    
    welcome Monica ! hope you will like my ”party ” too !
    http://rajkumarmilan.wordpress.com/2014/07/07/party/
    
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Alice Keys

8 Jul 2014

Another kind of party. Nice poem. Aloha.

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1. Monica Lee
  
  10 Jul 2014
  
  Mahalo & Aloha 🙂
  
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  1. Alice Keys
    
    10 Jul 2014
    
    🙂
    
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